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Before You (Poem by Kyra Organa)

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I don’t want you to be hurt But I don’t want things to change I want things to be the same Like before all of this pain We used to be friends Laughing away all the hours But then you happened Now that I know your strange love My world has fallen apart I don’t know how to see you Nor the feelings in my heart I may act the same I may smile like before But inside evolved Do I have feelings for you? Or am I just a mirror Reflecting your flattery To me it isn’t that clear

Author's Note: Sorry weird shippers, this is not about Mark

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  1. Nova Rade4/01/2020 02:11:00 PM

    Fun Fact: As of April the 1st 2020, this is the most popular April 2020 post so far! :D

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    1. Taco Empress Kyra4/01/2020 02:42:00 PM

      Am I a joke to you? XD

      btw, I realized the current name worked better with an older draft. Have any suggestions on a better one?

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  2. Anonymous4/01/2020 02:55:00 PM

    Awww, I was SO about to start shipping you and Mark. XDD

    This is a great poem, and I love the rhythm in it so much!!! Amazing job!

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    1. Taco Empress Kyra4/01/2020 02:57:00 PM

      Sorry. XD

      Thanks! I worked hard to give it some predictability XD

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  3. NexusFox4/02/2020 08:19:00 PM

    Just realized two of the stanzas are haikus lol

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    1. Taco Empress Kyra4/03/2020 09:12:00 AM

      Yup! It was originally gonna be all haikus, but I came up with a bunch of seven syllable lines, so I got creative

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  4. Gabby4/07/2020 07:54:00 PM

    Gosh this is one of the most relatable poems in existence. I think everyone has been here and I'm sorry it's happening to you. Great descriptions and I love how you conveyed the tone in such a perfect way. I also like the varying arrangement of the stanzas. :)
    Best of luck girlie and just know somebody incredible is waiting for you out there. :)

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    1. Taco Empress Kyra4/08/2020 08:10:00 AM

      Thanks! I've never been good at relatablity, so it's nice to know I've improved.

      Thank you for the encouragement. :)

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  5. Shaly4/13/2020 10:55:00 AM

    This is beautiful, Kyra. Its heart breaking and sweet, and just so beautiful.

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