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Please Don't (Poem by The Golden Ray)

Please don’t stay,
Please don’t leave me.
Please don’t listen,
Please don’t ignore me.
Please don’t speak,
Please don’t stay silent.
Please don’t be there,
Please help me.
The pain won’t end,
The pain won’t go,
Will the pain leave with you?
Or will it just grow?

Comments

  1. Wow! I love the emotions! It is so indecisive. I love the style you wrote it in. It is very unique.

    It really reminds me of the dynamic between two of my book characters.

    Keep writing! You're amazing! :)

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  2. Gosh your poems are wow, like kyra said the indecisiveness, its just wow bc its so true, amazing o.o

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