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Lost (Poem by Kyra Organa)

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Author's Note: This is about my struggles as a thinker and emotionally dense person in a world of feelers and mushes

 Mark's Addition: To quote Kyra, "FEELZ!"

 I am lost In the swirl of emotions I am lost With my friends I am lost In a swirl of emotions That I do not understand I am lost When you break down in tears I am lost In all of my fears I am lost In a swirl of emotions That I do not understand I am lost In confusion I am lost On what to do I am lost In a swirl of emotions But I’ll still be there for you
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  1. NexusFox1/14/2020 10:17:00 AM

    I'm gonna be completely honest with you, Kyra, this is 100% relatable for me :P

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  2. Gabby1/14/2020 10:41:00 AM

    See, I'm a feeler but after something emotional happens, I usually ponder/think about it for about three hours analyzing what just happened, but I'm mainly just a feeler who overthinks

    As for the poem, it's beautiful and I love how you focused on the idea of not being a feeler (which is what most poems are based on, feelings) really interesting piece :)

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    1. NexusFox1/14/2020 10:44:00 AM

      It works well for feelers, too, though -shrug-

      I mean, really, emotions are a lot like Hydra from the MCU; "If you cut off its head, two more shall take its place." Emotions are really tricky, even for feelers xD

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    2. Gabby1/14/2020 01:33:00 PM

      That's true honestly, and what's MCU? I like that quote even thought I think it's talking about some fantasy creature i'll never understand XD

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    3. Taco Empress Kyra1/14/2020 05:34:00 PM

      Thanks so much!

      I guess that's the beauty of poetry, it can have a gazillion different interpretations gleened from it. To some people, this can be a love peom, others a tradgedy, etc. XD

      Wait, did I click Feelz? I don't remember that. XD

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    4. NexusFox1/14/2020 05:36:00 PM

      The MCU is the Marvel Cinematic Universe, Gabby :)

      And no, you did not click Feelz, I just added that -shrug- To quote Kyra (from my book), "Your welcome!"

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    5. Taco Empress Kyra1/14/2020 05:41:00 PM

      XD

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