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I Spy (Poem by Mark Borne)

I spy green grass,
Blue sky and white clock;
Cars and vans and bikes, too.
I spy yellow shirts,
Pink nails and red roses;
But I never found you.

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  1. This is so sad, but I don't know why! XD :P

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  2. Jeez dude your newer poems are so sad aww, this is so pretty, I love how you don't have a direct message, but you painted this picture than pretty much anyone has been in and idk, it just feels somber and I recall moments that relate to this that probs dont relate to what you felt writing it, but its cool theres space for anyone to insert their experience. Awesome poem!

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    1. Thanks :D And if you think this is sad, read "Coward". It takes a more comedic approach than most of my recent stuff lol

      I like writing humor, but the problem with humor is, if it doesn't come naturally, it doesn't work. And oftentimes, most of my humor is NOT poetic :P

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