I spy green grass,
Blue sky and white clock;
Cars and vans and bikes, too.
I spy yellow shirts,
Pink nails and red roses;
But I never found you.
Blue sky and white clock;
Cars and vans and bikes, too.
I spy yellow shirts,
Pink nails and red roses;
But I never found you.
This is so sad, but I don't know why! XD :P
ReplyDeleteIt's sad and I know exactly why :P
DeleteWell, it's good that you do. XD
DeleteJeez dude your newer poems are so sad aww, this is so pretty, I love how you don't have a direct message, but you painted this picture than pretty much anyone has been in and idk, it just feels somber and I recall moments that relate to this that probs dont relate to what you felt writing it, but its cool theres space for anyone to insert their experience. Awesome poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks :D And if you think this is sad, read "Coward". It takes a more comedic approach than most of my recent stuff lol
DeleteI like writing humor, but the problem with humor is, if it doesn't come naturally, it doesn't work. And oftentimes, most of my humor is NOT poetic :P