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The Sun Comes Out [Poem] | Filler With The PoetOfSteel

The Sun Comes Out

By the PoetOfSteel

Yeah, it gets pretty cloudy from
Time to time, it can be so foggy
And then your vision is blurred
And you can't see

Sometimes the Sun is hiding
The Rain falls down on everything shining
But that Rain falling down
Gives new life all around

Nobody told you it would be easy
But it definitely feel nice to be free
Look around
At what you see

And now everyone is waiting for the Storm to pass
But, like you, they should be dancing in the rain, because
The Storm will go
And the Sun will come out again

Thanks for reading! I wouldn't mind recommendations in the comments for if I should make this a song! Well, that, and I have nothing else to do. :P

Comments

  1. I think you should make a song, simply because it starts off with "Yeah", which a ton of my favorite music has somewhere in the song xD

    This is a really nice poem, though! I love it!

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  2. ooh that was sweet

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  3. Aww this is sweet, I love the analogies about life and dancing in the rain, I vote yes on making it a song xD

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