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You Told Me (Poem by Kyra Organa)

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You told me I was safe You told me I had nothing to fear You told me that you’ll wipe away my tears You told me that you loved me You told me you’d never leave my side Then you left And I realized you were a lie

 Author's Note: This poem is based upon a relationship in my Star Wars story. Also, a thanks to ShaePoems (that;s her name, right?) for this prompt

 Mark's Addition: ShaePoems' outdated prompt, you mean? Though, I've admittingly haven't been better. Shameless plug, at this precise time I posted my own poem responding to the same prompt. Mine is called, "Grow Up" for a bit of name variety.
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  1. Gabby9/20/2019 02:18:00 PM

    Jeez 2 super sad poems in a row, idk which one is sadder xD Really good job both of you :)

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    1. Taco Empress Kyra9/20/2019 08:49:00 PM

      Thank you! I'm glad you think I'm even comparable to Mark's

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    2. NexusFox9/21/2019 12:11:00 PM

      We shouldn't be competing to find out who's more capable of making others cry lol

      We both know I'd win that one, anyways, since it would be more sudden and unexpected from me -shrug-

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    3. Taco Empress Kyra9/21/2019 12:20:00 PM

      Well it depends. For example, I can make people cry, but only because i'm irrated or offendd someone. You can make people cry because you've shattered them. XD

      I actually think it is MORE expected, because you are more in touch with your emotions, so you can tug people's heartstrins better.

      where's the likes? There were 8. Now there is 4. Same for "Grow up"

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    4. NexusFox9/21/2019 12:25:00 PM

      So I still win -shrug- Shattering people is more powerful than offending or irritating them lol

      When it comes to my poetry, it's more expected, yes. But I was referencing actual, real, honest tears in a real physical world. No one ever expects me to affect people like that outside my poetry, and I try to upkeep that reputation

      Huh, you're right...Idk. Usually they come back; I always thought it was a glitch on my end, but I'm beginning to wonder if perhaps it's a site-wide glitch. They should come back soon

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    5. Taco Empress Kyra9/21/2019 12:29:00 PM

      It's also harder to do. So yes, for this, you win

      true. But i've never made people cry like that, ever. You can make people sad, i just make them laugh (or scared) XD

      Weird

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    6. NexusFox9/21/2019 12:32:00 PM

      :)

      -shrug-

      -nods-

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    7. Taco Empress Kyra9/21/2019 12:38:00 PM

      -wonders how Mark communicated so much solely through actions-

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  2. Shaly9/22/2019 12:00:00 PM

    Wow, Kyra. :) This is so good!

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