You told me I was safe
You told me I had nothing to fear
You told me that you’ll wipe away my tears
You told me that you loved me
You told me you’d never leave my side
Then you left
And I realized you were a lie
Author's Note: This poem is based upon a relationship in my Star Wars story. Also, a thanks to ShaePoems (that;s her name, right?) for this prompt
Mark's Addition: ShaePoems' outdated prompt, you mean? Though, I've admittingly haven't been better. Shameless plug, at this precise time I posted my own poem responding to the same prompt. Mine is called, "Grow Up" for a bit of name variety.
Author's Note: This poem is based upon a relationship in my Star Wars story. Also, a thanks to ShaePoems (that;s her name, right?) for this prompt
Mark's Addition: ShaePoems' outdated prompt, you mean? Though, I've admittingly haven't been better. Shameless plug, at this precise time I posted my own poem responding to the same prompt. Mine is called, "Grow Up" for a bit of name variety.
Jeez 2 super sad poems in a row, idk which one is sadder xD Really good job both of you :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm glad you think I'm even comparable to Mark's
DeleteWe shouldn't be competing to find out who's more capable of making others cry lol
DeleteWe both know I'd win that one, anyways, since it would be more sudden and unexpected from me -shrug-
Well it depends. For example, I can make people cry, but only because i'm irrated or offendd someone. You can make people cry because you've shattered them. XD
DeleteI actually think it is MORE expected, because you are more in touch with your emotions, so you can tug people's heartstrins better.
where's the likes? There were 8. Now there is 4. Same for "Grow up"
So I still win -shrug- Shattering people is more powerful than offending or irritating them lol
DeleteWhen it comes to my poetry, it's more expected, yes. But I was referencing actual, real, honest tears in a real physical world. No one ever expects me to affect people like that outside my poetry, and I try to upkeep that reputation
Huh, you're right...Idk. Usually they come back; I always thought it was a glitch on my end, but I'm beginning to wonder if perhaps it's a site-wide glitch. They should come back soon
It's also harder to do. So yes, for this, you win
Deletetrue. But i've never made people cry like that, ever. You can make people sad, i just make them laugh (or scared) XD
Weird
:)
Delete-shrug-
-nods-
-wonders how Mark communicated so much solely through actions-
DeleteWow, Kyra. :) This is so good!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
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