You told me I was your best friend,
You told me we'd do great things,
You told me we were meant to be,
You told me our love would never die.
You told me we'd be Romeo and Juliet,
You never told me that one day we'd grow up.
Mark's Addition: Posted at the exact same time is Kyra's newest poem, "You Told Me". She basically plagiarized all of my unwritten poem ideas when she wrote hers, so mine isn't as closely connected to my emotions as I'd hoped to have it, but I think it all turned out fine.
You told me we'd do great things,
You told me we were meant to be,
You told me our love would never die.
You told me we'd be Romeo and Juliet,
You never told me that one day we'd grow up.
Mark's Addition: Posted at the exact same time is Kyra's newest poem, "You Told Me". She basically plagiarized all of my unwritten poem ideas when she wrote hers, so mine isn't as closely connected to my emotions as I'd hoped to have it, but I think it all turned out fine.
Well that was a stab to the heart and one of the truest poems I've ever read, w o w
ReplyDeleteLol Thanks. It's a release of a bunch of emotions that have built up over about a decade :P
DeleteI can tell o.o xD
DeleteYour welcome for stealing your idea. I'll love to see your original poem idea, though.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is SO much better than mine is. It deserves to win. It has so much more emotion and is way more realistic than mine is. And then the final blow is when you mentioned growing up. It ruins everything. A slap in the face. XD
I don't have an original poem idea, anymore. I never got around to committing it to memory after I realized I was copying you lol
DeleteYou get, like, 10% credit, though. I was originally going to write a poem called, "You Told Me" which was an accusatory poem towards one friend I had, but after I saw yours, I decided instead to write a poem called "Grow Up" which is a mournful poem directed towards a different friend lol
Yup! You were coping me, not me psychically seeing your idea and copying YOU. XD
DeleteI'll take it. Does that mean I get 10% of your views for the contest. ;)
"Coping" or "Copying"...? xD
DeleteNah. If you read the email I sent, you'd know I judged based off likes in the end, and we tied. If it was comments or views, I'd have won
Maybe both! Maybe I was coping BY copying. XD
Deletelol, true.
Even if I gave you 10% of my post's views NOW, you'd still come 1 view short. Back when the contest ended, it'd have been a bit farther away
DeleteOoch.
DeleteThis is pretty, Mark. :)
ReplyDelete