All of us had paid the price
Because of our belief
Creature’s freedom, for the “greater good” is the sacrifice
Destitute souls everywhere are begging for relief
Evil cruelty has ravaged all
Faithless leaders driven by corruption
Greatness comes before the fall
Hail! Before long there’ll be an eruption
Ideas, hopes, and dreams are born
Justice is demanded, and they won’t turn back
“Kaboom!” goes the capital, now battle scarred and torn
Lights in the sky, flames from the recent attack
Men and women struggle to thrive
Now worse than before, more lives are lost
Objecting to the slaughter yet fearing for their lives
People are wondering if it’s worth the cost
Questioning the world they know,
Rebellion is growing
Sacrifices are made, lives are lost, although,
The fight is showing no signs of slowing
Unknown the enemy, their regime is falling
Vacating their territory, they surrender
Weaker than they knew possible, away they go crawling
X-ed out of their point of great splendor
Yet in the shadows, they rebuild their army
Zeroing in on their next enemy
Author's Note: The is an acrostic poem that can apply both to the real world, dystopias, and my Before hope story, so enjoy!
Mark's Addition: This was submitted for her marathon on the 1st of February.
Author's Note: The is an acrostic poem that can apply both to the real world, dystopias, and my Before hope story, so enjoy!
Mark's Addition: This was submitted for her marathon on the 1st of February.
wow! That long ago! 0-0
ReplyDeleteEven if this was for a fictional story, I loved the message and meaning behind it. It kind of shows the destruction of humans, with as well communicating the aspects of a rebellion.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it. :D
DeleteHuh, I never noticed that lesson, but I agree with you, it's a great one