Cicles;
Such a beautiful shape.
There are no twists,
No sudden turns.
It's a cycle of preparation,
Of determined paths.
But it remains forever dull,
Chances you expect,
Can always see.
Things never change,
And soon you see,
The same faces again.
Such a beautiful shape.
There are no twists,
No sudden turns.
It's a cycle of preparation,
Of determined paths.
But it remains forever dull,
Chances you expect,
Can always see.
Things never change,
And soon you see,
The same faces again.
Idk, but I really like circles, since at least I know what to expect. Gotta love repetition. Lol.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, cool poem. I think I find this way too relatable, but still, I love the meaning.
-thumbs up-
Thanks :D
DeleteI like circles, too, but I think I'd prefer octagons. I can predict the general direction, therefore, and simultaneously there are the occasional twists and surprises :/ It's kinda the best of both worlds lol
This is so interesting.... hmm.... I'm unsure how to feel about this, and idk if I live on a circle.... hmm.... interesting... definetly a thinker....
ReplyDeleteBesides trying to find how I relate and don't relate, I love this! It's a thinker, bc I'm picturing a spiral, but this is just a circle, and you just loop around again and again with the same routine and see what's gonna happen before it happens.... hmm.... this just rang really deep to me idk XD
ANYWAYS. Great piece!! :)
Lol Thanks xD
DeleteWhat a great poem. Circles are my second favorite shape my first is a square.
ReplyDeleteSquares are neat; out of all the basic shapes, triangles are my favorite, though
DeleteAnd I like circles, but when it comes to math, I try to avoid them at all costs lol. I can never nail the formulas for area and circumference of a circle
I like this, but I don't like circles. Nothing changes with a circle.
ReplyDeleteCircles are cool, but I don't particularly like life in the shape of a circle, as this poem implies
Delete"Evil comes in round shapes"-Bad Lip Reading
ReplyDeleteMe- Boy, your life must be full of evil then!
In all seriousness (realtively) this is a wonderful poem, that as Gabby said, is thought provoking. My life (and i'm pretty sure everyone else's is) is a crazy squiggle. At times it loopdeloops, seemingly going in circles, but it's always moving forward, wether you know it or not. XD
But ugh, if life was a circle it'll DIE of boredom.
...I remember that Bad Lip Reading -.-
DeleteI didn't say my life was round :) Jumping to conclusions, are we, hmm? Lol
Lol Your life definitely isn't concentric xD
It's the "It's Not a Moon" one.
ReplyDeleteIs your life an oblong spheroid, then?XD
*scoffs* Understatement of the year. (;
-.- Not every Star Wars line really needs a song...lol
DeleteMy life is a hexagon. It's got those twists and turns, but it's overall fairly round :)
"When the time is right, birds will bite your face" XD
DeleteHexagons are so fun! They're one of my favorite shapes. (after the crazy loopdelooping squiggle)
"Don't fall asleep. Don't. Fall. Asleep." -Jedi Master Yoda
Delete-rolls eyes- I don't like hexagons. Then again, I don't like the number 6 in general, so it's understandable how I may not like a shape with 6 sides and 6 angles
"It was waiting in the bushes for us, then ripped off your dad's face. He was screaming something awful."-Obi-wan Kenobi
DeleteI love putting hexagons together to form honeycombs. That's really interesting. What do you have agianst the number 6? It's so random. XD
-shrug- I have reasons. Vague, secrets reasons, but reasons
Deleteokay....
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