About a year previouslyā¦
Rebekah woke silently and let in a slow, ragged breath. She squeezed
her eyes shut, as she always did when concentrating.
Thump.
The sound was inside the
house, and Rebekah instinctively knew an intruder had broken in. She jumped off
her bed and grabbed her pocketknife off the dresser, then approached the door.
Then she froze as two
loud bangs came from her parentsā bedroom. Gunshots.
Two of them.
Her blood ran cold and she retreated to her
closet and buried herself in a ton of stuff. She knew she should have tried to
warn her sister, but she had never actually faced a gunman before. She had no
idea how to disarm them, how to escape from them, or even how to survive their
attacks. Besides, she thought, Hannah sleeps lighter than I do. Sheās
probably already hidden.
But Rebekah knew her sister was gone when she
heard another gunshot, this time from a neighboring room. Hannahās room.
She covered her mouth
with her hand to conceal a scream and even pinched herself as she heard her
bedroom door yank open.
āWindowās open,ā a man
growled. āShe heard us and escaped. I told you we shouldāve invested in that
silencer.ā
āOur suppliers arenāt
willing to give theirs up so easily. Itās more expensive than our profits from
this job,ā the other grumbled. āLook, we can fake her death. You still have
that hostage from the other job?ā
āWe kill her, we lose a
couple grand from the other job!ā the first man protested.
āWe donāt kill her, we
lose five grand from this job,ā the second retorted. āNow
pick and choose, which paycheck do ya want to see in your mailbox tomorrow?ā
There was a silence
before the first man responded. āYou better make this up to me. We find the
other one, wherever she went.ā
āDeal,ā the other
agreed. āLetās make this quick.ā
Rebekah couldnāt even
think when she heard the gunshot. After a few hours, she managed to formulate a
single thought: Sheās dead because of me.
I traded my life for hers.
Rebekah stood in front of the cashier impatiently, although she made no
indication she was in a hurry to leave. Canned food items, as well as a few
cereal boxes, were scanned one by one. Not fast enough.
āWhat happened to you?ā
the cashier asked. Rebekah didnāt blame him. She looked filthy. She quickly
formulated a response that wasnāt a lie, but also failed to reflect the truth.
āMy aunt up in
Thomasville died,ā she responded. āMy parents and sister wanted to go up and be
with my grandmother. They said theyād be back soon.ā
The cashier shrugged and
continued to scan items. As soon as she could, she left the store and raced
down the street to the orphanage she had begun to call home.
Less than an hour later, she was in a car with four complete strangers.
The two adults sat in the front seats. The boy who was probably five years
younger than her sat behind his father, who was driving, and Rebekah sat behind
the mother. She hadnāt bothered to remember their names.
But she did have a
question burning in her mind.
āWhy adopt a teenager?ā she
asked. āItās not like itās going to last long.ā Especially if those men ended
up finding her.
āWhy adopt at all?ā the
women asked kindly. Rebekah didnāt know the answer to that question, but she
figured that it was a rhetorical question and decided the conversation had
ended.
She glanced to the side
and saw the boy staring at her. āWhat happened to your mommy and daddy?ā
Rebekah felt her face
redden from embarrassment. Not even the orphanage actually knew the truth. But
she couldnāt lie to this helpless boy, could she?
Thankfully, the mother
stepped in again. āSometimes, people make bad choices, and it hurts others.ā
Rebekah silently nodded
and looked out the window. It was truer than the woman had realized. She was
barely able to comprehend the sudden jolt in the car before she blacked out.
āYou are one unlucky gal, arenāt
you?ā the doctor asked her. She had finally recovered from the car accident,
and the emotional trauma following her new familyās death. Now, the doctor
summed up all of Rebekahās pain and suffering in one question.
āThat would be an
understatement,ā she muttered. āI can go, now?ā
The doctor hesitated and
then nodded. āIām not quite sure if itās best, though. Sometimes, orphanage
girls appear dead on the streets, these days. Sure youāll survive?ā
Those men are working so hard to catch me. Whatās their deal?
āNo, but death canāt hurt me more than life
has, so if I do dieā¦ā Rebekah
shrugged.
āTell you what, Iāve got
friends up north, Iāll see if any of them are willing to adopt, and in the
meantime, you can stay with me.ā
Rebekah opened her mouth
to protest. This was a complete stranger! She had no idea if safety was
actually on this doctorās mind! But she glanced to the side, saw a newspaper,
and printed on it was the headline: āKillers Strike Again! Three Girls Killed!ā
āOkay,ā Rebekah
reluctantly agreed. No one knew her past, after all. No one knew who she was. If she was going to be
honest with herself, she didnāt even
know who she was.
Present Dayā¦
Rebekah left with her family feeling happy. She now had a new friend:
Myra. And at the same time, the killers had no idea she had moved to the east
Texas area. She was safe, and so was her friend.
No one has to know about the past. Itāll only put more people in
danger, spread rumors, cause panicā¦
She shivered.
āEverything okay?ā
Jerome asked, being the only of the family to notice.
āYeah, Iām fine, just
cold,ā Rebekah told him. Yeah, right,
cold in seventy-eight degree temperatures.
But Jerome simply shrugged. āOkay. Iāll turn
the heater on when we get back.ā
Rebekah Hammington. I can live with that.
Wow, Mark. I love how you built upon her character. This chapter helped us understand Rebekah more and gave us a much in depth background. (I love those kind of chapters.) Great job. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteThis chapter is amazing! It's amazing how you have such a different background for her compared to the others, and idk, I just really like her as a character, I know its fictional but its a pretty inspiring story to hear how she's overcame and had to deal with all of that. This is so good, I'm excited to see where this goes! :)
ReplyDeleteDe nada!
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No, it totally means "hamburger meat" XD
Delete(Yes, it means "you're welcome" lol)
:o Welp. Hamburger meat... That's a pretty good "you're welcome" gift if you ask me! :D
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You guys speak...um type very well in Spanish. :)
DeleteHaha! Why thank you! :D
DeleteOoh, this chapter is awesome. The character development is great, and it feels so natural with the transitions and how it correlated to the previous chapter. Rebekah seems like a very interesting character and she has as well a very interesting background. Awesome work on this chapter, and as always, I await for the next one. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :D
DeleteActually, though, the transition isn't mine. I took inspiration from a movie called "Wonder", which flipped backwards several times to retell the same story from a different perspective. Sure, this isn't nearly the same, but the general transition from one idea to a next was only executed that well because I had a guide to follow
I forgot about Rebekah until now
ReplyDeleteSorry for the delay :P I'd planned on releasing it Sunday, but I got a bit distracted :/
DeleteWhy can't I find chapter 7?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure; I used the search bar and I found it. I did change much about the blog since Watching Time chapters were released, so maybe it's glitchy (By the way, sorry about the messed up formatting)
Deletehttps://markswiftnexus.blogspot.com/2019/02/watching-time-novel-chapter-7-extended.html
Oh, silly me, I didn't even see the search bar XD
DeleteThanks :D