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Letting Go (Poem by Gabby L.)

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Staying up late, looking at the ceiling Thinking of the moments and forgotten feelings I miss you so much, where have you gone? Did I mess up too much? What did I do wrong? I should stop blaming myself, it can’t be my fault But I was the one who brought this to a screeching halt You’re on my mind, I can’t leave you behind I was once your light, and you were mine Hours go by, memories hit rewind Replaying again and again inside of my mind But I can’t live in guilt, time to close the door I’ve realized that you do not care anymore I thank you for the times we shared And some days I wish you were still here But I’ve changed and so have you And I think we both know what we need to do Our paths may cross but please know, it’s time for us let go I know it will hurt, but it’s better for us both Goodbye my friend, I wish this didn’t have to be the end But I hope you know I cherish every moment we spent.

 Author's Note: True.

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  1. Shaly P.2/17/2019 01:29:00 PM

    Wow, Gabby! You did a fantastic on this poem. I love the emotion and the way it was written. You're an amazing writer, Gabby. I hope you know that.

    P.S.

    I hope whatever happened, it heals. :)

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    1. Gabby2/17/2019 01:49:00 PM

      Thank you so much, Shalymar! That means a lot, it's very reassuring to hear. :)

      And thank you, it is, slowly, but it is. Thank you. <3

      P.S I replied :)

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  2. Marysa Writes2/18/2019 02:51:00 PM

    :(

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  3. ThePoetofSteel2/19/2019 01:55:00 PM

    Great poem! It got deep, and I can relate to those types of issues! Nicely done!

    P.S. I hope you feel better!



    P.S.S If someone left you, they made a giant mistake! I know for a fact that you are talented, sweet, and one of the best people ever! So, their loss. Yikes, bad choice whoever they are (if they exist)!

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    1. ThePoetofSteel2/19/2019 02:24:00 PM

      P.S.S.S You are truly amazing!

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    2. Gabby2/19/2019 04:26:00 PM

      Awh, thank you so so so much! I'm sorry you can relate. :(

      That is so sweet, thank you, really, it means more than you think to hear! It is based off of a few people I know who had left, but it's getting to a place where I'm accepting it and letting them go. Thank you again, your comments really mean a lot to me, they always brighten my day! :)

      P.S You're amazing too :)

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