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The Breeze (Poem by Gabby L.)

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Cold to the touch You need gloves If you want this Type of sad love I’m contaminated Darkened by what I have created A painted cast Upon fragments Of chipped skin Hoping this sin Will disappear With the wind It always blows Far away from Who I used to be These feelings Don’t mean Anything to me I should feel Something real But I don’t know How that’s possible In this cast It’s hard to move But I’ll be able to Once this month Has passed, it Won’t last me More than the Evening breeze Here one instant Gone the next The breeze west Will take away Every single Ounce of pain This day will pass These feelings They won’t last I’ll be okay Tomorrow is A brand new day I’ll be alright The next night Won’t be made Of fear and fright I’ll be fine Don’t worry The light shines I’m not in a hurry The sun will rise And the moon Will set I’ll be okay The breeze Will take Me away

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  1. Marysa Writes1/17/2019 01:28:00 PM

    Beautiful

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  2. Lucy1/17/2019 04:00:00 PM

    I really love this, Gabby. This is amazing, and I love how you arranged the lines--really sets the mood of the poem, in my opinion, along with the pace, which seems fast. This was beautiful. Well done!

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    1. Gabby1/17/2019 04:16:00 PM

      Thank you so much Lucy! That means a lot, I'm glad you felt the faster pace (which was how I wrote it.) Thank you again! :)

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  3. Shaly P.1/18/2019 12:11:00 PM

    Awww, this is so pretty, Gabby. ( I hope you're okay. If anything, I'm here. :) )

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    1. Gabby1/18/2019 12:46:00 PM

      Thank you Shalymar, I'm okay, don't worry! <3 I really appreciate that, thank you again, you're the best :)

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  4. ThePoetofSteel2/14/2019 10:50:00 AM

    I LOVE this! So much meaning, and I really like how it shows even the shadows can bring light! Especially in dark times! Remind's me of that one CWC meeting, where you didn't come, but after 35 minutes and 34 seconds of waiting, you showed up just at the end! That made my day! So I can easily relate to this poem!
    Note that the time above I did not count. (That would be weird)
    Nice poem!

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    1. Gabby2/16/2019 10:25:00 AM

      Haha! Thank you soooo much! Lol that's funny, at first I was like wait you really counted the minutes? XD Anyways thank you so much! I'm glad you could relate. :)

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