Naomi
threw the present hard against the wall and cried out in frustration. All she
wanted to do was be Myra’s friend, but she couldn’t get close. After thirty
minutes of sobbing endlessly, she managed to get a hold of her emotions and
calm down. She hasn’t even been here
twenty-four hours, yet. I can’t expect her to accept me with open arms.
She wiped her face and went to her door. On the back,
she had a list of things she needed to remember to do. She stared at “Befriend
Myra” and shook her head at herself. She took the pen and wrote, “Wash Face”.
She locked her door and made her way back to her bed. Lifting the mattress, she
pulled out a small stack of papers. She pulled the bottom one out specifically
and wrote the date elegantly at the top.
Letting her emotions go free, she began to write into
her tear-stained journal.
When
Myra woke the next day, she could immediately tell something was up. There was
too much noise in the living room. When she went to investigate, she found Fia,
Naomi, Mark, Earl, and a boy she didn’t recognize all sitting and talking.
“Myra!” Fia exclaimed. “Earl just
invited us to join your vacation!”
Myra was immediately stunned.
Vacation? How come she had never been told? It
probably has something to do with how I basically arrived two days ago.
Naomi seemed to recognize this problem, too. “Um, did
we actually tell Myra?”
Earl’s excited face immediately fell.
“Oh, uh…well…maybe I got a bit carried away,” he admitted with a guilty shrug.
“We’re going to Florida for a week.”
“Florida?!” exclaimed Myra.
“Living conditions there are awful,”
the boy Myra didn’t recognize agreed. “I used to live there. I’m not terribly
thrilled that we’re going back.”
“You don’t have to come,” Naomi
reminded him.
“I need a break,” John countered, a
tear beginning to form. “Please. As long as I can get away from here, I’m
fine.”
Myra wondered why he was so bent on
leaving. Before she could ask, however, Earl cut in. “It’s alright with your
families, by the way,” Earl told the kids. “John’s were perhaps…too eager, but
the rest thought it’d be a brilliant idea.”
“I need to pack…” Myra interrupted,
although she had no idea what she would pack.
“Naomi, why don’t you help Myra?” Earl
told the unwilling sister. “The rest of us will load the van.”
Naomi
could tell Myra didn’t want help, even though no words were spoken. Maybe that
was why Naomi could tell.
Eventually, after going through
clothes for about five minutes, Myra sighed and slammed the drawer to the
dresser. “How am I supposed to pack? None of this actually belongs to me. It’s
like…stealing.”
“Or borrowing,” offered Naomi with a
small shrug. “Just choose several pairs of shorts and a week’s worth of tank
tops, and you’ll be fine.”
“Why not this?” Myra frowned while
holding up a pretty shirt.
“It has long sleeves,” Naomi replied,
a hint of a grin touching her face. “I went to Florida every year for as long
as I can remember, so trust me when I say you’ll want to avoid wearing that. Especially
since it’s summer.”
“Oh,” Myra muttered. She stuffed the
shirt back in the drawer without folding it, again.
Naomi smiled and turned back to the
closet she was rummaging through, and then froze. A tear began to come to her
eye.
“What is it?” Myra asked, going up to
the closet.
Naomi didn’t reply at first. She knew
all Myra was going to see was a white sleeveless dress with swirling golden
patterns. “It was my mother’s,” she told Myra quietly. “I had forgotten about
it.”
“Oh.” Myra seemed disappointed, for
some reason. “What happened to her?”
“It doesn’t matter,” Naomi told her,
trying as hard as she could to shut out the memories. She glanced at Myra’s
bag. “Come on, let’s finish. Father wants to leave as soon as we can. And don’t
worry about breakfast, he stop at fast food places once every hour.”
For
the first half of the trip, Myra sat in the front with Earl. The trip from
Thomasville, Texas, to Crestview, Florida, which they drove in one day, had
taken almost eleven hours.
But when Myra went to get in the front
seat when they got ready to leave Crestview, she was stopped by Fia. “Um, do
you think I could sit there, now?” she asked nervously. “If you don’t mind, of
course!”
“Uh, sure,” Myra shrugged, and climbed
back to where Fia had been seated on the way over. Next to her was the boy she
hadn’t actually gotten to meet.
“I’m John,” the boy told her, sticking
out his hand. She shook it.
“Myra.”
“I know.” He didn’t smile. Instead, it
seemed solemn. Almost…jealous.
Why
would he be jealous of me? I’ve got nothing. Does he wish he had a rich family,
too?
Myra didn’t bother asking. She just leaned towards the
window and stared out. The car began to move, and once they hit the main roads,
Myra began whispering the names of things she saw. She fell asleep fast, and
dreamed of dragons.
“Living conditions there are awful,” the boy Myra didn’t recognize agreed. “I used to live there. I’m not terribly thrilled that we’re going back.” The shade...personally, I prefer Florida to where I'm from.
ReplyDelete“Naomi, why don’t you help Myra?” Earl told the unwilling sister. “The rest of us will load the van.” Quick to get things started, I see.
A tear began to come to her eye. I can't be the only one who thinks these characters cry....a lot.
Dragons...why?
Florida is awful for those who dislike heat; like John (that's the boy's name)
DeleteYep!
Well, Myra and Naomi both last relatives shortly before the story begins. Naomi lost her mother, and Myra lost her entire family, plus her friends. Those two are therefore going to cry a lot. Mark is also under a lot of emotional stress, because all his friends lean on him for support, so he has to deal with their problems plus his own, so he might cry occasionally. Fia is very lighthearted, though, and therefore probably will never cry, and Ethan and John, like any generalized males, aren't easily emotionally moved. Although, John might have his moments...
Very emotionally unstable group of people...sounds like my kind of party xD
DeleteLol I just realized I didn't have to explain the boy's name, he introduces himself in this chapter XD How could I forget something I wrote so shortly beforehand? lol
DeleteAnyhow, yeah, it sounds kinda like a group you'd fit in well with. You could also probably eventually learn something from them; I've been mapping out a cool character arc
I feel a tiny bit insulted but not in a mean way xD I really like this story so far. Can't wait to read the rest
DeleteThis is awesome! Aww, how sweet, the box was a present! I love this, your characters have such deep backstories and I hate that I love it. XD Really really amazing job, John's character is intriguing, and I like the bond Myra and Naomi started to form! Excited to read more! :)
ReplyDeleteYes, but what was in the box?! To Be Continued! :D
DeleteYou will not believe how much planning/notes have gone into (and are still going into) this novel. It's. Insane. Well, compared with how many notes I usually take lol
Haha! I bet, with my novel, I literally just think as I write and update the plot lines later since as you could imagine, most of the time it becomes a jumbled mess. And that's awesome, I love how everything is eventually revealed, It turned out to be a gift!!! Didn't expect that, you through me off when you said it could have been a board game and then she went and played board games with Fia, I didn't expect that. XD I bet this takes a lot of planning though, its really well developed and organized. :)
DeleteThat's usually how I write. I take some notes here and there, but they're useless. Most of it is head-knowledge. It always comes back to bite me lol
DeleteWow, so many complex and mysterious characters. And yet again, you happily troll the readers on what happened to Naomi's mom. XD
ReplyDeleteWho's this John character? It's killing me!
Oh, Earl is an evil genius. He is making Naomi and Myra bond by long extended road trip together. So much for Myra locking herself in her room. Either it's going to work out and they'll be best friends by the time they survive the road trip, or they are going to come out hating each other. I wonder how it's going to turn out.
I've been to Florida before, and all I can say is that you described the weather pretty accurately.
Yes. I leave more mystery lol XD
DeleteJohn is...well, you'll find out XD He takes on a more dominant personality in the next chapter.
Huh, decent idea; but the road trip is really a way for Myra to bond with someone else...
Yes I have XD I live in Florida, and I was THRILLED about the cold front that went through! The cold front that actually ended with mid-60s as a high! :D
I think I've run out of things to comment, I've remembered to click notify me from now on.
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