Myra
woke up at around six in the morning, and tiptoed out of her room. She noticed
many of the doors closed, and at one, she heard a man snoring loudly, and
instinctively knew it was Earl.
She moved back to her room and opened
the closet. Brushing away a tear, she looked through the dresses. Many were
sparkly and bright, but she settled on a plain black sundress. She moved into
her private bathroom and quickly combed her hair. She slipped on a pair of
black sandals and looked at herself in a mirror that reached from the ceiling
to the floor. She looked pitiful, but at least she didn’t look like she crawled
out of a garbage can.
She made her way to the grand entry
doors and cringed as a voice rang out.
“Where are you going?”
Myra turned and found Naomi staring at
her with wide eyes. “For a walk,” Myra told her. It was true, and it was
exactly what she thought she needed to say to get away. “Is that alright?”
Naomi nodded. “I was just curious.”
Myra looked closer and noticed that Naomi was hiding a small box behind her.
She couldn’t tell if it was a board game box or something else.
“Okay,” Myra sighed. She left the
house and began her walk.
Ethan
hurriedly rushed down the sidewalk, rapidly pushing buttons on his smartphone.
He was supposed to be at work in ten minutes, and work for an hour, and then be
at school until four, and fifteen minutes later had to go back to work. It was
busier than he had ever been in the past, and he was not happy. His phone
buzzed, and he focused on the new text from Fia.
Busy
all day, again?
Ethan kept back a laugh. She was super serious about
getting punctuation, grammar, and spelling, even in text messages. He smiled and sent a quick reply, although he
figured she would be less happy about his confirmation. As he suspected, she
didn’t reply even though his phone reported that she had seen the message.
Ethan sighed and continued down the
sidewalk, but in only a matter of seconds, bumped into someone else. “Oh,
sorry!” Ethan instinctively muttered. He picked his fallen phone off the ground
and saw a reply from Fia.
At
least you’re not bored like me.
Myra’s
stomach twisted as she fell to the ground. That’s
why you always pay attention to where you’re walking.
She had been so lost in thought she hadn’t seen the
boy who had been rushing down the sidewalk. “I’m sorry!” she told him, right as
he was basically saying the same thing. The boy picked up his phone, looked at
it, and smiled.
He turned to Myra. “I’m Ethan,” he
introduced himself.
“Myra.”
“Nice to meet you, Myra,” Ethan told
her. “Look, I’ve gotta go, but could you visit my friend Fia, if you get a
moment? She lives down the road that way. You’ll recognize the house because it
has a red door.”
“You expect a strange to meet with a friend?” Myra asked
incredulously. She began to wonder what kind of city this was.
“Mark texted me about you,” Ethan shrugged. “You’re Naomi’s
new sister? I trust you.” Without waiting for a reply, he took off.
“I’m so going to regret this,” Myra moaned, and began on
her journey to Fia’s house.
Fia opened the door and
found a strange girl standing there. The girl stared at her with a grumpy
expression on her face. “I’m Myra,” she introduced herself. “Ethan sent me, and
I didn’t have time to argue.”
Fia’s face cleared. “Oh, Myra, I’ve heard so much about
you! Come in!” She mentally went through a list of what she was wearing. Striped red and blue dress, no shoes, OH MY
WORD, did I forget to brush my hair this morning?!
She really hoped
she made a good impression. Good friends were hard to find, and even harder to
keep. Even more was the fact that, if she could cheer up Myra, who was
apparently grumpy twenty-four-seven, then she would make a huge score with
Ethan. He might even come to visit, although she wasn’t going to pin her hopes
on it.
Myra entered and followed Fia into the living room, and
then Fia dashed off to grab several board games. Oh, Candy Land, Sequence, Risk, I have definitely gotta bring Life and Apples to Apples, too.
Those are two awesome games!
She carried the
huge stack into the living room. “Want to play something? Oh, we also have a
Wii system!”
Myra seemed overwhelmed by all of this, and Fia immediately
felt bad. Myra opened her mouth to speak, but then Fia’s mother entered. “Who’s
this?” she asked curiously, but a worried expression crossed her face. Fia
didn’t blame her. A stranger in the house wasn’t cool.
“This is Myra, Naomi’s new sister!” Fia announced. “And
Myra, this is my mom, Penelope.”
“Nice to meet you, Mrs…uh…” Myra stammered.
“Call me Mrs. Robinson,” Fia’s mom replied with a smile.
“Well, don’t let me keep you, play away!” She sniffed the air. “Oh, goodness, I
hope I’m not burning breakfast! Be right back, girls!”
Fia giggled. “She prides herself with being an excellent
chef,” Fia explained to Myra. “She hates burning food, though.”
She immediately scolded herself. Your non-stop talking is going to scare her away!
Is
this girl crazy? That was the first thought that came to
Myra’s mind when she met Fia, and throughout the encounter, she kept thinking
it over and over. An awkward silence eventually fell over the two. Finally, Fia
shrugged. “So, do you want to play something?” She talked slower, and seemed more
timid, as if she had been disciplined about her non-stop talking right after
she made her comment on her mom’s cooking skills.
“Um, sure,” Myra shrugged, reminding herself that she didn’t
have to do this for Fia. It could be for Ethan. Is that any better? He’s still a stranger. “What game do you like
to play the most?”
“Apples to Apples!” Fia immediately exclaimed, as her face
brightened.
“Could we do that with only two players?” Myra asked
critically.
Fia’s face fell. “Oh. Yeah. My mom might join after
breakfast, but you’re right. How about Life?”
Myra had played the game once a week with her mother, as
they completed to see who could be the champion of the game. Its simplistic
rules and straightforward gameplay had appealed to her at the time, and she
hoped it’d appeal to her, today. Fia had a newer version, however, and found
that complicated gambling rules, a longer board, and more split paths had made
the game a maze of difficult-to-understand concepts.
Fia’s end score was nearly ten times as big as Myra’s.
“Let’s play something else,” Fia suggested. “Oh, I know,
what about Uno? That’s a really simple game and very easy to play.”
Before Myra could comment on how everyone plays Uno differently,
Mrs. Robinson called from the kitchen. Fia gave Myra a glance. “Come on, you’re
in for a treat! My mom’s cooking is killer!”
Killer. Myra
glimpsed a fraction of a flashback of the unwanted memories. She heard an echo
of her mother’s scream ring through her ears. Suddenly, the tears she had held
back while playing Life came spilling out, but she made no sound with her life,
except to say, “I’ve got to go. Thanks for having me.” She bolted out the door
and ran back to Naomi’s house as fast as she could. She may not have been
willing to accept it as home, yet, but she was willing to call it a refuge. A sanctuary.
She fell onto her bed, and her body shook as she wept once
again.
I know I posted the other chapter relatively soon, but Chapter 1 seemed to be a hit, so I decided, since I've finished Chapter 2, might as well post it and then focus on poetry for a few days.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's awesome! This chapter sure is a place of mystery! What's in Naomi's box? Who's Ethan? Was Myra's mother murdered? How?! Why?!?! THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThe introduction of Ethan was very creative and hilarious. It was a great way to tie in this seemingly random scene with Myra's perspective to push the plot along.
The small town feel is really enjoyable and is realistically written.
Fia is a hilarious character! She's quirky, but with a realistic amount of self-criticism to add depth to her personality.
Keep up the good work!
Lol Yeah, the plot seems to thicken, here; although, like the synopsis claims, it's not the true arc of the story.
DeleteThanks! I found it difficult to incorporate the "small town" feel, especially when I live in a city, but I thankfully have enough memories of my life in Texas to be able to write it semi-well.
So this is just the beginning... (which makes sense because it is only chapter 2)
DeleteWell, you did a great job. (;
Oh, wow, the second chapter is only the beginning?! I'm shocked! Lol
DeleteThanks!
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DeleteYeah, I realize the logic isn't exactly the best. XD (btw, I removed the previous comment because I had embarrassingly horrid grammar)
DeleteAh; now I'm curious what you said, though XD
DeleteActually, I just noticed, since I get email notifications, I know exactly what you said :D I approve of you decision to delete the comment, though XD
Deletelol. Pretty much the exact thing, but with worse grammar. :P
DeleteI'm glad you do :)
DeleteI think I originally was going to make the sentence more complex, but then decided not to, leaving a very awkward and clunky sentence.
“Call me Mrs. Robinson,” Meet the Robinsons
ReplyDeleteWhy are they playing board games, who are these people, I'm confused
....Well that got dark quick
Lol Yes, that movie is great! That was accidental, though XD
DeleteBoard games are these mystical games that you can play away from electronics. I know, hard to believe; there's entertainment beyond computers and phones and television? Board games, however, are ancient. We're so ahead of our time...
Yeah, it did, but it enhances the plot -shrug-
Okay, I know about board games, we have more than you can imagine and I even play them with my friend, it's just unusual and random.
DeleteLol You'll fine that Fia's family isn't rich enough to afford loads of electronics, so aside from her damaged 3DS, she relies heavily on board games for entertainment. She decided board games would also be a good way to "bond" with Myra. Little does she know...lol
DeleteThis is sooooo great! Myra is just an amazing character, I love the darker backstory, and how certain words trigger a memory from her past. I also love how Fia reminds me a lot of myself. I love when the characters of a story/novel/book actually have a personality and they are like real people, making them relatable. Ethan's fast paced side character made a world of difference, and its killing me to know whats in Naomi's box. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteLol Thanks! I actually have based none of the characters in this novel off of anyone, at all, which is ironic, because these chapters are some of my best writing, so far :P
DeleteThat's really cool! And amazing it's not based off of anyone, but that's what's neat is when someone can create a character that is so life-like it feels relatable without basing it off of someone! Really awesome job!
DeleteListen to Let the Games Begin by AJR you might like it.
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