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Friendship (Poem by Mark Swift)

It opens eyes, and cups ears,
That you may see, and you may hear;
Its arms open to the world it reaches,
To all who listen, everything it teaches;
Its presence is felt all around,
In its love, we all abound.

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  1. Wow, that poem is a accurate summary of friendship! I love how you grounded it with our senses; it really gave the poem some substance and an image.

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    1. Thanks! I was hoping I was doing something right...lol

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  2. This is so great! I love how you rhymed each line and it all came together so perfectly with a sweet meaning!
    (Also for some reason I can't get the ywp site to work so sorry if I dont reply for a while or at all on there!!)

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    1. Yeah, it appears the chatrooms were closed :/ At least, they're closed for me

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    2. Yeah, that's what Lys said, I got all nervous because I thought I did something wrong or something (since that happened once in a course, the teacher closed my course because I was behind pace Lol) so I'm glad its for everyone. XD
      Btw you said you had a regular nanowrimo account right?

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    3. Yes, I do. Same username as my YWP account

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    4. I buddied you, because why not? lol

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  3. And then there's my post that has to do with friends. What a vast difference.

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